The Soldier And The Official
Mark wrote:
I read it five times and each reading delivered a new and different experience.
Jack O 'Lantern
Markos wrote:
Great story, great music, beautiful artwork, makes for a compelling web experience. I will be back for more!
 
 Bull At The Gate
 Jon wrote:
Fantastic! Please put more stories up soon.
 
The Seed
 Peter wrote:
Where do you get these ideas! Very nicely done!
 
The Seed
 Robert wrote: The story, I believe, should be read concretely. This is a seed germinating, looking around in the dirt at his sterile and damaged cohorts. He makes it to the cruel surface, only to be burned by the sun, plucked by a bird and dropped somewhere else. The writer did a very good job of making this experience dreamlike (at first I thought it was a story about a man's nightmare). I think there are psychological levels to this story to be found, though I will have to read it again. Thank you for posting this story.  
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